DVA: RISE Peer Feedback

First off let me say what an inspirational young woman,

standing up for a cause that some may fear standing up for. A suggest I would
have for your video is to flip the ending with the beginning, have the speaking
in the beginning and then have the rest of the videos with the music playing
over then at the end. That may even help to get your video to the minute mark
for the final submit. The videos were good and shot perfectly and the voice
over was good other than some jumping in the videos. That tends to be the
difficult part when trying to combine multiple speaking videos into one it is
easy to see where a person may have been in one shot compared to the next. It
may help to have the scripted practiced so that part of the video can be shot
as one. Overall though I enjoyed the video and learning about Amina and her passion
for human rights and women’s rights.