Hello Sean, I had the pleasure of reviewing another one of
your assignments. I like how honest you were with your story. Another thing I really
found inspiring was your willingness to find a job you do not like just so that
you could make money. Even though jobs like that did not work out for you,
sometimes people forget that income is income. I do wonder though did you
consider using more personal images? Or even using creative commons images?
Perhaps you should consider this when revising your project. A good about of
your images have “Shutterstock” across them, which leads me to believe these
images are actually copyrighted. The direction of career we all are going for
is going to require more images we personally take. For the most part
everything was great, images told the story. Only other suggesting I could make
would be to show more emotion in your voice, I know this can be hard to do but
it could help with the story more. Hopefully you found some of this useful.
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